Kai Song's group gave us some advice. They told us to check our grammar, add screenshots of the comments of our survey, put in the names of the people we interviewed on, to elaborate more on why we chose to use cross-collaboration and to add evidence of our meetings.
By doing so, we have fixed our work by adding the screenshots of the Facebook, Skype meetings, the evidence of the cross collaboration on a map, add in the names of the people we have asked and proofread continuously.
